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Wanabees

by PerfesserN 2 Reviews

Thodore Nott is up to no good, Pansy and Millie get more help around the house.

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Bellatrix,Goyle,Harry,Hermione,Lupin,Pansy - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2008/01/03 - Updated: 2008/01/03 - 2801 words - Complete

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  • Bella Rising

    (#) Vanir 2008-01-03 02:50:08 PM

    I'm sorry i didn't review the previous chapters, but i just had to continue the story. The Mama Pansy idea was just brilliant. What would they really do? I hope this.

    The idea that Dark Lords are born out of stupidity isn't new, but you did paint a great picture of it.

    The collaboration between the afflicted pair is just so great, and i love the respect they show each other. Putting them in the House of Hope is a great move, and the fact that Remus asked her about her feeding habits regarding the children was perfectly in character. I wonder what Harry will say to it the next time he pops by. I also look forward to the Sons attack on the House, with three shapeshifters on the premises. Odin gives the term 'ankle-biter' a whole new meaning.

    Brilliant. I just spent my entire rating allotment on this story.

    Vanir

    Author's response

    Wow, thank you for that glowing review! I love your description of little Odin as an ankle biter. If I had to go back and re-title this fic I think I'd call it "The Accidental Families."
    N!
  • Bella Rising

    (#) selenepotter 2008-01-03 02:59:18 PM

    So you're making the Sons of the Serpent into Nott's gang? Did you get the idea from my Harry's Harem fic?

    I think that makes a much better name than the deatheaters.

    More!

    Author's response

    Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing.
    Um, I didn't intentionally use any of your plot points from your Harem stories, but I love reading them and there may have been some subconscious transference.
    I'll happily give you credit for the concept though, now if you'll just write some more. . .
    N!

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