[One-Shot] She had just wanted him to be there for her, just for that one night, instead he was being sucked off round the back of some sleazy bar. As usual.
(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2008-01-04 12:42:12 AMdoes it HAVE to be a oneshot?? can't you write MORE?? pleeeaaassseee
this is spectacular
and every synonym in the thesaurus
Author's responseI'm afraid so. =(
And wow thank you! You do make me blush! I like all your synonyms though =D
- One word: amazing.
Seriously. By the last sentence I had to remind myself to breathe.
I like how it's a oneshot, how it doesn't drag on into one of those stories that lasts 3456789 chapters but never actually goes anywhere. I like the ending--it's nice and bittersweet. It's good that it's not all Hollywood and Happily Ever After. I love it.
Author's responsethank you!
breathing is good!
happily ever after endings annoy me too. They're usually so unbelievable!