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• The Bones Identity

  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-07

  This is quite the fascinating start and I'm going to be looking forward to seeing the backstory that explains why the MoM is so interested in "Jason Bourne", though the title of the story makes me wonder if he's not Edgar Bones under -very- deep cover.
  
  This promises to be a most enjoyable read.

  Author's response

  Good guess, but not quite. More is on the way.

• The Bones Identity

  (#) LordNemesisBlack 2008-01-07

  AS stated in the review by cateagle "This is quite the fascinating start and I'm going to be looking forward to seeing the backstory." I rarely tend to read cross-over's as they tend to lean to one particular stroy or the other with just the charcter's from the other showing through. However with your first chapter I see a rather well blended story that encompasses two diffrent stories. Now I know that every aurthor get's this from a reader at one point in time but I would like to offer any outsider view's that you may deem helpfull and will leave my email address here for you.. Again a well written first chapter of what I hope is a story that will come to completion.

  Author's response

  What attracted me to a Harry/Jason crossover was that they were both fully realized characters. That makes it easier to keep a balance between them by switching points of view.

• The Bones Identity

  (#) jabarber69 2008-01-07

  So who is Jason Bourne really? Susan Bones's dad or maybe Amelia Bones secret husband!?! good story by the way, I also like jason bourne and have read I think two other hp/jason crossover stories, actually I think they were the same story but revised and both sadly didnt go anywhere and were eventually abandoned by the author! So hopefully you will actually take this to the finish!

• The Bones Identity

  (#) onelost 2008-01-07

  Well begun. You do not mention a wand or any other obvious magic with Bourne. So Bourne is perhaps something "other?"
  

• The Bones Identity

  (#) Cateagle 2008-01-07

  Hmm, if he's not Egar Bones, perhaps Amelia's husband, or the guy she was interested in, under very deep cover, perhaps with the necessary memory mods to make him forget he's a wizard and with some means of supressing his magic for the most part?

• The Bones Identity

  (#) MrPowell 2008-01-07

  Well then. this looks intersting. looking forward to where you're taking this

• The Bones Identity

  (#) AnnF 2008-01-08

  Typo "many Juggles"

• The Bones Identity

  (#) Tolotos 2008-01-08

  Well, a very nice begin. Hmm, Bones, is he the son of Edgar Bones? I'm looking forward the the next chap

• The Bones Identity

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2008-04-07

  Very interesting start.
  
  gunny

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