oh I like this story.
sounds like a hit to me.
I got a little confused with Frank.
but i'll read it again.
Update Soon please. can't wait for more.
i agree!!! keep writing, i really like where this could go!!!! and im excited for more, so hurry!!! hahah
so..frank was like...having a bad dream or soemthing?? i hope hes ok.
Great start....Can't wait for more!
This sounds like a great story :)
Keep updating; can't wait for more!
Your good at writing too (Y)
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