- Well, this is definitely a new aspect to the whole "screwed up future so they go back in time to try again" idea. I really like it and have to agree about the whole thing with Harry falling into a great depression after Hermione refuses him, he is prone to depression, especially after Sirius died. Anyways, I can't wait to see more of this story.
(#) sparky40sw 2008-01-13 07:39:49 AMYou have some really interesting concepts here, and having Harry gain control over his magic because Hermoine tampered with things is pretty cool.
I will be looking forward to seeing where you take the story, and appreciate the referral to the other author.
- Hmm, definitely a different approach. Is it Harry -really- going nasty or just using whatever he can to survive? There is a difference and I can see where Hermione could, with effort, help him and guide him. It won't be easy for him, but she has a chance.
BTW, was that Harry's spirit working with her before she went back? That would be one explanation as to how she survived as long as she did before coming back. If so, I wonder where that spirit is now?
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-02-19 05:14:09 PMVery different, and wonder who the voice was, as well as what other changes might have occured because Hermione traveled back? Something to see that the Order became as bad as the Death-Eaters due to Harry dying, though maybe they weren't as pure as they were liked to be portrayed.
- Nice story so far tho I don't by the whole going back in time makes someone else evil. That's like buying a cake makes me a chef. Sounds more like Voldy minus the 'and this is where I torture you now'. I'm soo glad that prologue wasn't your, seriously it hurt to read it. Now I see that it was someone else's as well as a condensed version. Time for the next chap!!
Author's responseThat's been a very common misconception. People have always thought Harry was Evil because he had an extra little ability with his magic and fought back against the Dursleys and was rude to Hermione when she ran into him and knocked him down. None of that points towards him being evil, so there's nothing you're going to have to buy. It changed his personality, but there are a few reasons for that and they'll be shown over time.