(#) Wonderbee31 2008-01-15Whoa, now that was a shocker to say the least, Hermione obliviated Harry after they made love, got to wonder how Harry feels about that now, as well as what will happen because of the baby that he and Hermione helped create. Funny and stragely wierd to see that Blasie seems to have gone full bore with his/her womanhood, as well as what will happen with the whole Sons. Sweet moment with Padma in the pub, and kind of a shame she and Harry couldn't have a chance, though maybe they will? Fun chapter.
Author's responseYes, Blaise does seem to be in touch with his feminine side. You know, of course, Harry will go all noble and insist on marrying Hermione.
Let's see what comes of this. . .
(#) Geovanni_Luciano 2008-01-16OK, I liked it but I think that you ned to develop Blaise's character more. What I would suggest it more horcruxes, and find a different theme rather than the one that Voldemort found. You've already got Blaise with breasts. Have him feminized with each horcrux, perhaps. Food for thought.
Author's responseGlad you like the Blaise character, and I like the idea of him becoming more feminized as the story progresses, as it is he's twisted as a pretzel. Keeping him in his present state will only add to his conflicted psyche, doncha think? If we bring his mother into the mix, whew! Freud would have a field day with that one. I don't plan on him doing multiple horcruxes, the one will do for now.
(#) Coolone007 2008-01-16Wow! This has been a great story so far. I had never been a fan of Harry/Ginny, but when you descrtibed how Ginny died, I had tears in my eyes. That was one of the few times a Fanfiction had brought me to tears. I myself have read hundreds. I am gogin to start recomending this story to all my friends.
So harry and Hermione got busy. I am not surpised. They were two hmormonal teens in a tent alone for weeks. the one thing I was wondering about in your version when did Ginny get hit? I was couriouse about that. I can't wait to read more!
Author's responseThank you for reading and reviewing, and thanks for the encouraging words.
You must be one of the positive raters as well. Thanx again.
I like Ginny as a character, I just don't see her and Harry together. And we won't even mention Ron and Hermione - puleeeze!
It was hard to write about Ginny's death, I tried to be as gentle as possible, but it still hurt to see her go. I like Ginny and can easily see her and Neville together.
In my story Ginny was hit with an acid curse just after the fall of Voldemort. Many of the death eaters and their sympathizers will try to regroup under a new standard.
I thought you should know
That there's two Chapter Fifteens.
No Chapter Sixteen.
-[ Finally got around to reading this story. Bella-centric fics are not generally to my taste. It was an interesting read. I enjoyed it.
Only major snag I ran into was the error in numbering the chapters. Chapter Sixteen was mislabeled as an extra Chapter Fifteen. It messed up the little link arrows for the next chapter. ]-
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