- Okay so this was a good chapter. Very well written. Very hot!
I can't help but wonder like what Mikey was saying to Gee on the phone. If I had to guess I would think he was telling him how stupid he was for hooking back up with sky.
And he IS!!! gah!!! they didnt settle anything! they think they can just fuck away their problems! and they cant!!
Especially the line where Gee says 'we talked-yeah really' Uh when???? I didnt see any talking going on in this chapter unless you count their 'I'm so dirty babe' bitchings.
thats number one. Number two. Gee must not have been getting any of off Liz if he was that eager to see sky. I mean gah! what kinda rock and roll sex god is he!!! he cant 'hold it much longer' gah!!
but I am glad he wasnt fucking liz, but I suspect Sky was doing Billy. I mean you promised us lots of secrets before the end. Like shit we didnt know about and I think thats gonna come out. Either Billys got a thing for her or he has one for Gee. Im not sure.
But overall Im not pleased with Sky or Gee here. I mean I get they love each other and I dont know. Maybe it is normal to sweep problems under the rug.
Dont get me wrong. I do like to see them happy. Im just a bitchy reader I suppose. I bitch when sky is alone, I bitch when shes with him. I dont know what I want. I mean I do want them to be happy, but I want it to be real. I want them to sort out their problems and be really truly happy and not just clinging to each other cause its all they know.
Author's responseYou're Billy obsessed chick! I swear!
You're jealous someone got some Gerard Way candy and you didn't! -tease-
- that was intensive.
you keep getting better and better at these sex scenes. although the bruce thing was sort of disturbing to say atleast, it was written very well and this was even better.
are you ever gonna stop getting better? seriously, i'm starting to think you have some weird alien super powers that you never told us about..
Author's responseI'm gonna reveal all about my alien powers in my autobiography, 'me and my alien powers that makes me write decent sex scenes starring Gerard Way', Kinda long but catchy!
- forgot to mension that i feel very bad for mikey.if only he knew that gerard wasn't making those.. -sounds- because he was frustrated with mikey.
mikey's better off not knowing.
i still feel sorry for him, but not enough to not enjoy knowing something he doesn't =]
Author's responseIgnorance is bliss for the sake of Mikey's mental health, I'd never be the same if I knew my brother was fucking someone while being on the phone with me..
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