Categories > Cartoons > Avatar: The Last Airbender > Dragons of the West

Chapter 1

by FireChildSlytherin5 1 Reviews

Set after episode, the Firebending Masters. It was dinner time after Zuko and Aang arrived back from the Sun Warriors’ community. Aang, Sokka, Katara, Toph, Haru, the Duke & Teo, wait for the arr...

Category: Avatar: The Last Airbender - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Fantasy,Humor - Characters: Aang,Katara,Sokka,Zuko - Warnings: [!!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2008/01/18 - Updated: 2008/01/19 - 2445 words

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  • Dragons of the West

    (#) secret_philosopher 2008-01-19 06:34:07 PM

    hey i like the plot of this story, however, you need to word on your grammar and spelling. Some people say that these things are not necessary for people to enjoy a story, but i disagree. it is very distracting to have a lot of mistakes. it causes ambiguous meaning. Usually i would not have read a story that has so many mistakes, but it has a lot of potential and you portrayed the characters well. nice job overall.

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