Set after episode, the Firebending Masters. It was dinner time after Zuko and Aang arrived back from the Sun Warriors’ community. Aang, Sokka, Katara, Toph, Haru, the Duke & Teo, wait for the arr...
(#) secret_philosopher 2008-01-19 06:34:07 PMhey i like the plot of this story, however, you need to word on your grammar and spelling. Some people say that these things are not necessary for people to enjoy a story, but i disagree. it is very distracting to have a lot of mistakes. it causes ambiguous meaning. Usually i would not have read a story that has so many mistakes, but it has a lot of potential and you portrayed the characters well. nice job overall.