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Desert Vigil

Post ROTS: The limited contact of an exiled Jedi.

Category: Star Wars - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/01/28 - Updated: 2006/01/28 - 1426 words - Complete

Reviews

• Desert Vigil

  (#) street-howitzer 2007-01-16 08:50:20 AM

  "He return to the desert" -- Returned?
  "He fly away before dawn" -- Flew?
  "but between first Qui-Gon than Anakin" -- Then.
  
  Other than these, a good interpretation of Obi-Wan's life at that point in time. Poignant and sweet.

• Desert Vigil

  (#) Polgarawolf 2007-03-30 10:01:14 PM

  Hmmm. It ends just when it's starting to get interesting! Sigh Ah, but it is well-written, and that one flash of bitterness when Obi-Wan is certain Anakin still would have turned away from such knowledge is exquisitely painful.

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