Post ROTS: The limited contact of an exiled Jedi.
"He return to the desert" -- Returned?
"He fly away before dawn" -- Flew?
"but between first Qui-Gon than Anakin" -- Then.
Other than these, a good interpretation of Obi-Wan's life at that point in time. Poignant and sweet.
Hmmm. It ends just when it's starting to get interesting! Sigh Ah, but it is well-written, and that one flash of bitterness when Obi-Wan is certain Anakin still would have turned away from such knowledge is exquisitely painful.
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