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Desert Walk

by Izzy 2 Reviews

Sequel to Desert Vigil. Obi-Wan goes about his one remaining task.

Category: Star Wars - Rating: PG - Genres: Angst - Characters: Obi-Wan, Qui-Gon - Warnings: [!] - Published: 2006/01/29 - Updated: 2006/01/29 - 2205 words - Complete

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  • Desert Walk

    (#) street-howitzer 2007-01-16 09:11:42 AM

    A few corrections:

    "as if the last 13 year had never happened" - years
    "leave him with a soothing and lulling caress" - Leaving him?

    And again, a great sequel to a great story. :) Can't wait to read the third one!
  • Desert Walk

    (#) Polgarawolf 2007-03-30 10:11:15 PM

    (Please excuse the following outburst: I just don't like Qui-Gon under even the most normal of circumstances and his saintliness manages to hit every single blamed one of my buttons here.)

    Oh, bulls*it! Chosen One my arse! Perhaps if you mealy-mouthed hypocritical inept incompetent Jedi Masters had gotten off your holy hineys and actually tried to uphold your own Order's freakin' mandate, Vader wouldn't've bloody well had to BE the blasted scrouge of god for the GFFA! Gah!!! This is EXACTLY why I usually cannot abide Qui-Gon Jinn! Pompous, arrogant (good gods, how much hubris can one man hold?!), hypocritical arse!

    Hrumph!

    On the other hand, the bit about how he sees the cliff is awfully intriguing and it is rather fascinating to see how Luke is progressing/maturing at a quicker rate than normal.

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