Whenever someone mentions that little Sullivan girl my world goes quiet. Whatever caused her to bring forth her untimely death. I thought I would never know.
(#) falloutgirl 2008-01-28 06:05:53 PMI liked it, it was really pretty.
Is there more to it? Cause you haven't put up the 'Completed' thing.
I liked the way you portrayed it and restricted yourself from diving into million and one adjectives to describe the situation. You just created that aura that satisfied all the need for emotion in this piece. 'Loved it truly! Keep writing!