After the death of Sirius, and learning the contents of the prophecy, Harry gets the opportunity to get away for a while. Independent Harry. H/LL, H/SB, but more friendship than romance.
(#) Nautilus 2008-01-21 04:32:11 PM
ur changing the plot, so what a little name changing among friends.... congras so far, i like it... good conversation... seemed luna-istic... nice.
(#) DrT 2008-01-21 05:01:45 PM
Interesting setup; I look forwad to seeing what you do with it
I hope SB stands for Susan Bones.
This was a very interesting start. I especially liked Harry's trick with the hook in the chamber. It's the kind of simple trick that most writers (myself included) would never even think of.
Hope to see more soon.
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-01-21 11:07:07 PM
I like this story.
I hope it will stay H/LL.
I like Harry / Luna parings as well as Harry:
Please update soon?
(#) Clell65619 2008-01-22 06:37:10 AM
-Nice start. Looking forward to more.
(#) jabarber69 2008-01-22 08:41:07 AM
Hey screw with what everybody thinks! This is a well thought out and extremely interesting story and ideal you have come up with as well as very well written! Definitely gonna be on the look out for more!
(#) JustAReader 2008-01-22 10:06:04 AM
I always look forward to reading one of your Fics, and this one doesn't look it will disappoint.
It's a good start. There's a lot to like about Luna, and some time out in the woods hunting mystery animals with a soft girl like Luna will do wonders for his head compared to turning in circles back on Privet Drive.
(#) Wolfric 2008-01-22 11:15:47 AM
I enjoyed the first chapter, it seems a promising start. Thanks for writing. W.
(#) PerfesserN 2008-01-22 03:23:41 PM
I have to agree, Oddment Lovegood rolls off the tongue better than Xenophilia.
Looking forward to frequent updates!