- grins I read this on your yahoo group this morning, but I've become reliant on those author alerts. I'm glad this site offers something similar to FF.Net (alot friendlier, it seems), I'd hate to miss a chapter update. (I hate that!)
My thoughts? Definitely a good chapter! And yes, it did bring Harry's character "down to earth-like", but not "face pushed into dirt-like". That, I appreciate, and the events of the chapter itself were entertaining. Thank you! (I spent time rereading the story and now I'm too giddy to even think straight!
So, in short, I love it. I look forward to reading more.
- Great job! Damn FF.net and their blind deleting! Why did they ban your story anyway? I can't think of anything you've put in it that makes it delete-worthy, not that they usually need a spectacularly good reason. Sorry, I'm just a little annoying with them lately as they've knocked like 15 of the stories I've been following off their site, and of course I only had links to the story and I can't remember which author was writing them, so I've pretty much lost forever a bunch of stories, a few of which I really liked. semi-inarticulate grumbling
Oh well, great job on this chapter, it's nice to see someone pointing out a few of the little idiocies in HP, I mean I'm not anal enough to stop reading the story over them, but it's kind of satisfying to have Harry poking holes in Albus' skewed logic every now and then. I mean did Dumbledore even try just POURING the stupid potion out of the bowl onto the rock? He went through every magical thing I can think off right off the bat (besides the round abouts like AKing the bowl) but the barrier didn't stop him when he poured the fluid into his mouth now did it, so who's to say it would have stopped the fluid from pouring out of the bowl and on to the ground?!
Great work on the story, keep up the good work, wherever your posting it.
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