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Chapter Forty

by Silvana 4 Reviews

It says violence, but it's only very slight. Honest.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters: Mikey Way - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2008/02/15 - Updated: 2008/02/15 - 1171 words - Complete

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  • Stop. Rewind. Replay

    (#) Alyss 2008-02-15 01:40:18 PM

    that was sweet of rick to follow, but he deserved it.
    what was he doing over at scarlets?? theres no real need for extra practice is there??
    scarlet- just misunderstood....
    is anna gona try and make rick jealous?? thru mikey....????

    mianna...sooon!!!!!!! =]
    xx

    Author's response

    In the first draft he didn't. But tha would ruin the spectacular (lol) thing I have planned.
    At Scarlet's? Talking, usual stuff.
    Yay, now yo uget it,
    lolz, oh yeah, 'cause she's that mean.

    Mianna= maybe
    xxx
  • Stop. Rewind. Replay

    (#) mychemicaldream0201 2008-02-15 02:25:17 PM

    “Where you last night?” Mrs Wilkinson snapped
    you should probably add a "were" in there somewhere.
    :D
    but otherwise there were few grammar mistakes.
    /end grammar nazi.

    Author's response

    Thanks! So sorry about that. I didn't proof it, (as you can tell!) Has now been edited.
    Once more, thanks.
  • Stop. Rewind. Replay

    (#) tragicWithACapital_T 2008-02-15 04:23:15 PM

    rick is nice but uh... i don't like him
    GO WITH MIKEY
    GO WITH MIKEY
    GO WITH MIKEY!
    :D

    gawsh amanda, DON'T CORRECT THE WOMAN'S GRAMMAR! -glares at mychemicaldream021-

    continue with your teensy grammar mistakes darling, the story is top notch :]

    i love it

    Author's response

    What's wrong with Rick? Though I agree, Mikey's better, but Will= the greatest.
    :]

    Thanks
  • Stop. Rewind. Replay

    (#) x_Charlie_x 2008-02-17 01:02:36 PM

    I really hope that she is just a friend although having had my head screwed with also the doubts are there.
    Good chapter =) Can't wait to see more =D

    Author's response

    What can I say? Not a lot really, so I won't say anything at all.
    Thanks.

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