It says violence, but it's only very slight. Honest.
- that was sweet of rick to follow, but he deserved it.
what was he doing over at scarlets?? theres no real need for extra practice is there??
scarlet- just misunderstood....
is anna gona try and make rick jealous?? thru mikey....????
Author's responseIn the first draft he didn't. But tha would ruin the spectacular (lol) thing I have planned.
At Scarlet's? Talking, usual stuff.
Yay, now yo uget it,
lolz, oh yeah, 'cause she's that mean.
(#) mychemicaldream0201 2008-02-15 02:25:17 PM“Where you last night?” Mrs Wilkinson snapped
you should probably add a "were" in there somewhere.
but otherwise there were few grammar mistakes.
/end grammar nazi.
Author's responseThanks! So sorry about that. I didn't proof it, (as you can tell!) Has now been edited.
Once more, thanks.
(#) tragicWithACapital_T 2008-02-15 04:23:15 PMrick is nice but uh... i don't like him
GO WITH MIKEY
GO WITH MIKEY
GO WITH MIKEY!
gawsh amanda, DON'T CORRECT THE WOMAN'S GRAMMAR! -glares at mychemicaldream021-
continue with your teensy grammar mistakes darling, the story is top notch :]
i love it
Author's responseWhat's wrong with Rick? Though I agree, Mikey's better, but Will= the greatest.
(#) x_Charlie_x 2008-02-17 01:02:36 PMI really hope that she is just a friend although having had my head screwed with also the doubts are there.
Good chapter =) Can't wait to see more =D
Author's responseWhat can I say? Not a lot really, so I won't say anything at all.