Ceteris Paribus. A latin phrase meaning all things remaining equal. Because they are just two sides of the same coin, of the same coin, of the same...
- I like the contrast between Amaya and Lyanvis a lot. Guileless/wicked, loving/bloodthirsty. Very pretty. You need to watch out for tense changes - there was a lot of that in the first part - and random capitalization. Other than that, I have no criticism. You really should just change the names and make it an original story, though.