Uh OhhH! Real Crap! This Chapter is a bit Fast moving, but the ending is like.. Wow.
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-02-27 02:38:06 PMAre you serious? You got like 6 reviews for your last chapter. I've been getting like...four for mine. Consider yourself lucky, dude.
This is absolutely not getting worse.
It's just as awesome as I said it was at the beginning, and your writing's improved a lot too.
So...don't get discouraged.
Awesome chapter, and fuck, Gerard? Car accident? Nooooonooooonooo!
Also-- I feel a little bad for Jack. He never really did anything wrong.
Author's responseI really am grateful, everyone is great!
I was just a bit worried that people had stopped liking it as much..
And thanks, the whole reason i write is to improve :D Its great that people notice.
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-02-27 02:53:10 PMHaha. Jack can go fuck himself up the asshole. Excuse my vocabulary. I don't like him.... maybe its because he has the same name as my ex. Oh well.
Aww. So sad! I might cry... no I won't. Only if Gee dies. But you wouldn't write a Death Fic!
Lmao. Random pieco of shit I am.
Author's responseHehe, you just said the complete opposite to the last review :P
Hehe, His name was originally called Jake :P But My Friends First name is Jake and middle name is Brock! I didnt want him to sound too evil!
And I like to keep my options open, maybe i WILL write a death Fic ...
- HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!
seriously, if you wanted more reviews you could have just asked!!!! hahahaa ... was it really necessary to hurt Gee? did he really deserve that? hahaha
im glad that they decided to get back together. maybe this tragedy will help frank sober up too.
anyways, great update. loved it.
(#) RyanRossLuver 2008-02-27 09:37:07 PMNOOOOO! Gee can't die...
If you make Geee die, you die...kidding lol. Poor Gerard...
I agree with AJ (ashamedtoriseandbe), Jack can go fuck himself...bastard....
No death fic, okay? I think I've made it clear now, lol.
n e ways, update soon and sory I didn't review last chapter - Internet fucked up
(#) sleepyfaerie 2008-02-28 08:30:09 AMsorry, ficwad is screwing up and not sending me alerts
but I just read the last two chapters
that was awesome
well, not it was TRAGIC
but awesomely written
how could Gerard do that, then how could Frankie?