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We'll make them so jealous we'll make them hate us

Category: Fall Out Boy - Rating: R - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2008/02/27 - Updated: 2008/02/28 - 1053 words - Complete

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• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) falloutbaby89 2008-02-27 07:59:08 PM

  Hey I am really sorry to hear about your grandmother. Hope your mom will be fine and your family. I think a sequel would be cool to read, because your writing is amazing. But it all depends on you. Dont have to rush. This was a beautiful chapter I loved how Pete reacted and wanted to cry when his children were born. Amazing.

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) pyrotechnicist 2008-02-28 04:40:02 AM

  im sorry about your gran aswell. its really hard to lose a family member especially if you were close. ive been through it ide know.
  just take your time adn it will sort itself out.
  
  yes this chapter was sooo sweet.
  pete was adorable and kristin was very realistic lol.
  i loved how the nurse just laughed and walked away.
  
  a sequel should be good.

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) DaniD 2008-02-28 07:26:51 AM

  Oh hon..I'm sorry to hear about your Grandmother. My condolences to both you and your family.
  
  I loved this chapter..and this line was priceless..
  
  "Ok Pete, here's the plan, I'll spread my legs and you pull the fuckers out! 17 hours is way too long! I can't take it! I quit, I don't wanna do this anymore!"
  
  I'm a fan of your writing now..so I'll read anything you decide to put out there.
  Take care..
  Dani

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) GossipGirl 2008-02-28 11:35:05 AM

  Oh my god -heartattack- I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!
  
  
  
  You know i love you
  Xoxo
  Gossip girl
  
  P.S. Feel special, I wrote this all on a blackberry. Once again, I LOVE YOU!!!!

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) x-PhotoProofKisses-x 2008-02-28 12:13:56 PM

  Aaw, a boy and a girl is perfect.
  Maybe you should do a sequel from a couple years on

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) kiara33 2008-02-28 02:54:35 PM

  awwwwwwwwwww this is amazing.
  you NEED a sequal.
  you must do one.
  

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) mooniexmisfit 2008-02-28 02:56:24 PM

  I'm very sorry to hear about your grandmother, I know how you feel. I was very close with mine.
  On a lighter note this made me smile, it was written perfectly!!! So adorable! I'd absoloutly love to see the wedding and more of them and the babies.

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) crackcouture 2008-02-29 06:16:51 AM

  Sorry about your grandmother. Condolences to your family, too.
  
  BUT! That was awesome! I don't really care if you write the same thing with different words, just keep writing! A wedding is definitely in order, YAY!
  -XO
  

• So Many Kids But I Only See You And I Don't Think You Notice Me

  (#) doyleangel 2008-06-01 11:37:18 AM

  Wow....fantastic story.....can't wait to read more of yours

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