Hope this chapters shows up entirely... if you don't see my note at the end, that means Ficwad's being evil again.
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-02-28 05:49:23 PMYay! The whole thing showed up!
All right-amazing chapter, as usual. The thing about Alyssa...wow...that's so sad.
Why the hell would Mikey not have told?
We're gonna find out later, right?
We better, or my brain will explode because of all the possibilities.
And Frank...aw...it was really sweet of him to think of Gerard like that, although it seems like he said the wrong thing anyway. It's the thought that counts.
More when you can? I'm adoring this. You can look on my profile - this story's on my very short favorites list.
Author's responseYay! xD
Yeah, you will definitely find out about what happened with Mikey in future chapters, we wouldn't want any heads exploding ;)
Aww thanks so much, i'm honored to have a story on your favorite list. I'll try my best not to screw things up! haha
(#) asherschick 2008-02-29 10:43:00 AMI was so sick my head was literally exploding and reading this chapter is the first thing I've done since I could look at the computer screen without my eyes burning and watering. And I've gotta say woow, amazing chapter!
And aaahhhhh, Frankie should have just kept his mouth shut!!! Gee must have felt rejected... I feel so sorry for Gerard, really. But still, I think Mikey wouldn't have let Alyssa die for nothing. Maybe, he thought something worse would happen if they rescued her? Like his own brother dying trying to rescue the woman she loves, maybe?
Wow! You actually gave us so many answers in this chapter but it's like those answers give birth to new questions. Has anyone told you you're such an evil genius, huh?
For some weird reason, the parts I always love reading about (especially in Frerards) are the beginnings of a relationship. The uncertain touches, coy smiles and things like that. The two characters denying what they feel and all. And now, Gee and Frankie are in that phase and I love it!!!
I talk too much, right?
Whatever... I'll be waiting for the next update!
Author's responseThanks for putting a huge grin on my face like you always do ;) Sorry to hear you were sick, but at least you are better now!
I like that part of the relationship too, thats why most of my stories have that phase in them.
You don't talk too much, you know i love your reviews ;)
Relax and take care of yourself so you don't get sick again. I'm going to work on the next chapter right now.
(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-03-02 06:03:21 AMWooow, so thats why mikey and gee get all pissy with eachother. Its nice to know some answers but... Mikey had a reason for not teling gerard about his vision right? I hope so, I dont want Mikey to be all evil lol. And I read the lyrics before each chapter and I love them, I think its great that you go through the trouble of finding them :] Cant wait for the next update this story is just...WOW!
Author's responseThanks ;)
Yes, he had his reasons, don't worry. You'll just have to judge for yourself if they are good reasons or not.
Thanks for answering the lyrics question, i'm glad you like me putting them up ;)
- I think I understand why mikey didn't say anything, you can't change the future or the past, and maybe the future would be way worce with gee gf in it, then he wouldn't 'like' Frank so much... good story, really keeps me writing
Author's responseThank you! Glad you find it inspiring ;)