- wince No, that's not a happy ending as 'tis. Even if there was a second chapter, with Hermione in a medical facility, or afterwards, and recovering, it'd take agreement on Ginny's part for it to really be a happy ending. -wicked laugh- The fun with cliches bit would be to have the two of them go off together and leave Harry standing there, a bit shocked and bewildered.
Author's responseI can't reply to this the way I want to without giving away the second chapter...if I post it. Do you want it? Do you? Because I could leave it a one-shot perfectly easily - it stands alone well enough.
Ah, who am I kidding? I hate it as a one-shot. toddles off to post second chapter
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