"His peripheral vision grabbed ahold of Ray, approaching him with Bert in a headlock. He nearly laughed. The whole scenario was so much more exciting now."
(#) fireXatXwill 2008-03-06 08:33:26 PMOMG...this just gets better and better! Seriously, FANTASTIC chapter. I don't really know what to say, but I think my heart just broke too...so sad! Poor Frankie. Yeah, I'm a bit incoherent know cause I'm totally hyper, but I loved this so much and I simply cannot WAIT for your next chapter. You write so well!
Author's responseAw. Thank you! I'll try to write more soon.
- "and his hair was amazing" this made me laugh so much.
Seriously though, amazing story. You're a brilliant writer because you explain thing so amazingly well.
This is definately my favourite story on ficwad.
I can't believe Gerard,I mean, poor Frank. It's just hit me that this is what he could've been like before he got cleaned up. What did it mean by "more than one was heartbroken"?
I really can't wait for more, update seriously soon!
Author's responseHaha, lol. His hair is amazing though. He has a right to think that.=D
Thank you...I'll write more as soon as I can get around to it.
(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-07 10:26:19 AMWow, Gerard is getting seriously evil. I don't really see how this is going to turn into a Frerard story, i mean, how could Frankie forgive all the shit Gee is doing to him. He doesn't give a shit about him at all.
Nice chapter, really well written. I like how Bert was all worried in this chapter ;)
Author's responseLol, yeah, the Frerard's gonna take a little while... I'm glad you liked it. I tried to make Bert kinda...nice-ish because most people make him the bad guy, you know? Like he's to blame for the whole fight.
(#) asherschick 2008-03-07 12:07:28 PMAhh, ahh poor Frankie! How is he gonna get over this? And I'm assuming the broken hearts belong to Frank and Bert, hmm? I could almost feel sorry for Bert, too, but I'm totally on Frankie's side, so...
Now, I can almost see a flicker of hope, with Ray learning about the drugs and all... Haha, and I appreciate the mental image of him keeping Bert in a headlock, by the way =)
Gerard's way too self-assured when he's high xD
Author's responseYeah totally. I hate what drugs do to people. I'm tryin to make a point with this story, you know?
I hope it works by the time I finish this...but at the rate at which I'm writing, that might take a while.
(#) broken_wings 2008-03-08 07:14:30 AMthats amazing.. you're a good writer and you have a good plot. most fic writers only have one of those.
and btw..more than one heart did break, because mine did too!!
Author's responseGeezus, thank you! Aw, and I'm sorry your heart broke...