Categories > Books > Harry Potter > The Power
- this story is a good idea but I think harry is way too open about his knowledge and not that independent and I think you need more detail
Author\'s Response: Well, he is only 11. The only reason he is hiding his abilities at this point is he doesn't want the attention.
- Does this not have story alerts? blinks I'm waiting for an email and here the chapter's been up already! Ah well.
I love the chapter! grins So much fun! Usually AU-PS plotlines tend to be a bit boring, but this is definitely interesting. ^_^ I can't wait to read more!
Author\'s Response: Thank you, kindly.
(#) TheUnicorn 2006-03-14How does Harry jump to these amazing conclusions with absolutly no data to base them on? 'Hagrid is a half giant' 'Hermionie likes Ron', etc... Also while I know Hagrid is terrible at keeping secrets he'd still not tell them about flufy so calmly or at the very least he'd panic when he realized he told them too much, much like he did in canon.
Author\'s Response: I thought I made it clear how Harry comes up with the conclusions that he does; I'm sorry if I did not. He could tell that Hagrid is different from regular people because he can sense magic, and Hagrid's is different. Concidering his size, giant would be the first guess.
- LoL... Kaapow, of all the words that you could use, you would use Kaapow LoL. So this story is going to be a Ron/Hermione story, but who will Harry going to date??
Keep up the great work.
Author's responseThank you. I liked my choice of words there. Thanks for the review.
- Thank you for accurately portraying Ron. He is a young, impulsive dumbass, who only knows how to deal with siblings that are forced to tolerate him. Don't change him. Please.
On the rest, awesome job with the spell. I laughed quite a bit. Keep up the good work.
Author's responseThanks. Ron's not my favorite character either.
(#) harrysfriend 2007-03-08I know this is way early but i fell I should comment. Ron is only ten and he said something hurtfull. That does not make him un-redeamable. Everyone makes mistakes.
That being said. This is a great story so far, Its a little fast but I like that you skip over the parts of cannon that everyone already knows.
Author's responseThere are some people that you just don't like. Harry just doesn't like Ron. He takes personal offense to idiocy. I'm not trying to make Harry into a saint (God maybe, but not a saint). Thanks for the review.
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