"There he was, sitting in a bathroom, trying to kill himself and then complaining that it hurt."
- Awww, no Gerard, don't die!
Was that a dream? If it was I really hope Mikey or Frank or someone come to save him.
Great chapter, please update soon.
To your little foot note on the used, I too think it should be a busier page. I would write something for it but I don't rwally know enough about the used.Hae you posted some stuff on it? If so, I'll take a look at it.
Author's responseThe Used is the most unique rock band to ever walk this Earth.
(#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-03-18 12:16:31 PMWHAT
You can't kill him.
Please say your not gonna kill him.
Update REALLY soon please.
Author's responseWell...the chapter name is "Dead." so uh...
You'll just have to wait and see...or read the chapter over and figure it out.
(#) asherschick 2008-03-18 01:24:53 PMNo no no noo, you're not gonna kill Gerard. Haha, right? He seems to have had enough of a lesson just by that frightening dream that maybe he'll try to get better when someone (hopefully) saves him... ahhh, someone must have heard all that sobbing and crying right?
Write more more more!!! I'm such a greedy bitch :P
Author's response=D Thanks, is all I can say.
(#) broken_wings 2008-03-18 03:28:10 PM^.^ here they are!!
*passes you cookies*
mmm....chocolate chip, yum.
"There he was, sitting in a bathroom, trying to kill himself and then complaining that it hurt. "
i LOVE that line. very possibly the best i've ever read...its very powerful. and this story is very powerful too. i dont think i've ever heard a suicide attempt described with such heartbreaking clairity...it was excellent, really well done.
*snatches cookies back* no more until you update!! maybe i'll throw in some ice cream too :P
Author's responseAw, shucks, thank you...I'm very, very honored to have you think something I wrote is the best thing you've read.
And well, those cookies were great while they lasted =D More asap.
(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-20 05:51:32 AMIntense. Yup yup.
So all those times Gerard said and thought to himself that Frank didn't mean anything to him... all that was pure bullshit, right? Because he obviously loves him to death... never better said.
That last parts a dream of some sort. Hopefully he'll wake up and the guys will cure him, Frank will love him, they will get married, etc etc and I'll shut up now ;) hahaha
Anyways... poor Gerard. Hold on, help is on the way... right?
Update soon and we'll love you more xD
Oh, and in response to your comment on my last review... yes, Gerard is definitely worth arguing over. I actually can't think of anything better to argue over. Frank maybe? It's a close tie hahaha
Author's responseFrank and Gerard...yeah...the sexy fight =D.
But honestly--I'd argue more over Frank.