Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance > The Savior of the Damned

Nerves Strung Tight

by crystalcrash 7 Reviews

Thanks for the reviews, they mean a lot to me. Alyssa is taken care of... but not in the way Frank would like.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Fantasy,Romance - Characters: Frank Iero,Gerard Way - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/03/20 - Updated: 2008/03/20 - 2598 words

Reviews

  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) RyanRossLuver 2008-03-20 07:08:44 PM

    That was amazing...beyond amazing.

    I can't wait to hear about Alyssa and the Ruins...I'm really intruiged!

    Update soon!
    xox Emmi

    I love Jimmy Eat World

    Author's response

    Thanks so much ;)

    I'll try and get the next chapter up ASAP.

    Yay for JEW fans xD
    < 333
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) Space 2008-03-21 02:08:53 AM

    Very good chapter! I can't wait to know how Alyssa escaped from the Ruins! And while I'm reading it, I wanted Alyssa back to the death somehow... :/

    xx

    Author's response

    Thanks!
    Yeah, i understand how you feel. It would really make Frank happier hahaha
    < 33
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) sleepyfaerie 2008-03-21 02:11:53 AM

    AAAHHHH

    NOOO
    poor Frankie hugs

    and that was an awesome chapter

    please update soon!

    Author's response

    Thanks! ;)

    Yes, poor Frankie. Things will get better... after some time... hahaha

    < 33
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) MCR_dynamite 2008-03-21 04:14:27 AM

    Aaah! IT'S A TRAP!!! DON'T TRUST HER!

    Okay, that's me being over-dramatic. But yeah, I'm both kinda happy that she's back and all, but I also kinda hope that something's gonna happen so that she goes away again, cause Frerard is just too sweet and the idea of Gerard being in love with a girl whilst Frank's upset and jealous is horrible! >_<

    I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed for ages, but Guitar Hero III is WAY too addictive and time-consuming!!! I haven't been on FicWad for ages!!!

    It's a fantastic story, though and you're a very talented author! I'm gonna have to come on FicWad more often so that I don't miss any more chapters! ^_^

    Author's response

    You're baaaack! I was wondering where you were! I thought you hated this story or something, i was sad about it hehe

    Hahaha I'm overdramatic sometimes too... it makes life more interesting :p

    Damn you! I wish i had Guitar Hero III! But then i would probably abandon this story and play it all day... hahaha

    Aww thanks, I'm glad you're back. ^^

    < 333333
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) asherschick 2008-03-21 09:34:49 AM

    You know what, I don't wanna trust her either, but I've said that before... Even if it'd be too heart-breaking for Gerard, I just want her to be possessed or something. I'm evil like that, sometimes... But for the survival of Frerard, she has gotta be gone! Out of sight!!! (Now, if I had been that poor Alyssa - assuming she is totally innocent of course - I'd probably hate me for thinking this ;P)

    And, of course there is the possibility that she's not evil or a spy but she's changed. Yeah, a person could change a lot under torture for three months. Now here's another terrible thought: She might have gone mentally unstable!

    Okay, I guess I can't generate nice feelings for the girl, maybe I will when she explains herself a bit. And maybe when Frankie calms down a bit, I don't want him hurting :'(

    Anyway, update soon cause now my PC is back and running again, so I'll be waiting =) (By the way, I was in Computer Aided Graphics class when I read this chapter while I should have been watching the instructor and drawing instead, mwahhhaaha. Of course I couldn't write my review, that would be too obvious xD)

    Jimmy Eat World is < 3333333. I think Work is an amazing song, I listen to it whenever I wanna run away or something. And it's an easy song to play so you get all satisfied and happy when it sounds good as you play it :P

    I shut up now :x < 333333333

    Author's response

    Yeah, not many reviewers trust her which is understandable; i mean, she was supposed to be dead and then she turns up 3 months later?! But yeah, she'll explain herself in the next chapter... once i get the chance to write it ;)

    Hahaha good girl, reading Frerard is much more educational than any class in the world, and we all know it! xD

    That song is awesome, i love it too! Of course, i love most of their songs... ;)

    Btw... update your story soon too! hahaha < 3

    < 3333333
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) Allymarie1121 2008-03-22 12:16:29 PM

    . So i'm a total Ferard junkie. and i want Alyssa gone.
    it's totally a trap!!!
    ...or something bad.
    poor frank :[


    can't wait for more!!!
    :]

    Author's response

    Thanks for the review!

    Next chapter is up ;)

    < 333
  • The Savior of the Damned

    (#) I-love-frank-and-max 2008-03-22 05:53:25 PM

    ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG ZOMG

    I love ur story its so god damn fucking good

    please keep writing its one of the best fan fics that ive read!!!!!!


    update soon

    Aggie

    Author's response

    Wow! Lol thanks a lot! It really means a lot to me ;)
    < 333333333

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