(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-03-24Oh my goodness! I swear your ending just gave me shivers!
I love how you wrote Brendon, it was almost as if it was really him speaking, and not just someone trying to write him.
It was just really really good. Especially the ending, it literally almost made me cry.
The angstyness of it all, and him never hearing Ryan's "I love you." is so sad it's almost heart breaking.
Thanks for sharing this! I hope you write more!
Author's responseThank you oh-so much. I'm glad you liked it.
Especially, since it's my first Rydon. And I promise you that I'll write more. I love Rydons. ;D
(#) Mikeysgirl 2008-03-25have you had experience? Because Brendon's feeling seemed so real believable that it was almost like being on that balcony with him. Thank you for writing a fanfic where everything doesn't work out and life dose end to soon, because that person can't live with the pain of being in loved with the one person that they can't have. this is a truly depressing story but that is what makes it so amazing.
Author's responseNo, I haven't had experience. I suppose if I did, I couldn't of written it. XD
Anywho, thank you for reviewing. It means a lot to me. And I'm super glad that you like it so much. I'm also glad to hear that people thought that they could actually feel what I was writing. I'm usually scared that I don't have that effect. Anyways, thank you. =D
(#) xStabxMyxBackx 2008-03-25omg...i agree with the others...lol...I LOVED IT...it was so sad...tear it was amazing and i nearly cried! Then i looked at my poster of PATD and saw Bden and Ryro holding hands and i smiled...lol...keep up the good work!
Welcome To PRETTY. ODD.
Author's responseThank you!
Truly, I'm glad you liked it.
(#) mooniexmisfit 2008-04-09yea northern downpour is where i got it from =)i still can't update til next week, i'm on my dad's work laptop as awe speak so, it's for homework strictly haha. i'm on aim tho, so shhh.
MADE IS COMING TO OUR SCHOOL. i wanna be a ballerina, don't laugh cause i'll totally give you a shout out. haha, if i make it.
Author's responseHOLY SHIT.
Yesyesyesyes. Gives me a shout out!
A ballerina, eh? I could never do that. AT ALL. I'm physically uncoordinated. And I've tried dance before. Not for me. =/
You would totally make it. You're awesome. ^_^
(#) XxMyChemicalPanicsxX 2008-05-09Now its my turn to review.
I mentally scolded myself for a very long time for not reading this chapter before. Having it bookmarked isnt enough seeing as i have about 100 things bookmarked. Can you believe i found this story a day after you published it?
5/10- 3/24= alotofflippintime
"Suddenly, Brendon jumped from the railing and in front of Ryan, as Ryan sighed in relief"
had me holding breth and my heart beat in that kinda way that hurts like youre gonna double over. I thought he was gonna jump!!
"/And he hopped upon the railing again and jumped, as desperate screams were followed behind him along with a sorrow filled,
"I love you, too."/"
That left me with my mouth WIDE open. I totally wasnt expecting that.
luv how Ryan said i love you too though. that made me feel better. X)
Even though I almost keeled over while reading this story, I think i'll be spending more time in your stories written section.
Author's responseMy, why thank you!
I'm glad somebody commented that part. I was hoping for some sort of reaction towards his jump from the balcony railing and in front of Ryan, and then off the balcony railing again.
I adore suspense, as well as writing it. :]
Thank you for taking the time to review. I always get so giddy once I receive reviews. :]
As long as you review, then all is fine. :]
I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.
(Even if it did make you wanna keel over.)
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