(#) linerlover 2008-03-25haha thanks for being grateful-- seems like an uncommon trait nowadays. anyway... yeah this chapter was really good, especially the description of a sleeping Alix at the end. If you want to look at examples of this kind of fic, two really brilliant stories i would recommend are Petals In The Wind and The Dove Keeper. I found them both on a livejournal group where there are a lot of good fics, but those are two of the best. I like the depth and background info you put into this chapter, and its a great fic so far- which is hard to say on a site like ficwad. but oh well. ill dig up the links for those two fics and post them as a review, so im not done yet...
(#) linerlover 2008-03-25i found them!!!!! squees
The Dove Keeper:
Petals In The Wind:
yeah... so theyre two of the best, but most of the authors on that livejournal group are excellent, and the woman writing Petals In The Wind wrote a very good standalone called Shattered Delicacy. anyway, great chapter again. loved the detail this time, and please keep going or i am going to run out of decent reading material.
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