Stopping in the middle of the room, he let out a snort. It was a sarcastic, hopeless, miserable sound which told him he couldn’t change anything, so why bother trying?
- Well tell your cousins thanks a lot for making us wait, joke!
That chapter was seriously moving.I just feel so sorry for Mikey and Frank out of all of them and now Franks angry.
It made me cry when you said about Frank being Gerard's angel, so sweet!
Fucking brilliant chapter, please please please update soon!
(#) asherschick 2008-03-27 12:55:53 PMAhh, little devil cousins, I've got a bunch of those too. It gets like torture sometimes, running after them :P
And just pheeeew! They saved Gerard :) For a moment there he seemed like he had learnt his lesson, but then... Gahhh, he needs the guys to pull him through this thing. And Frank, holding him and crying, the way you described that, with Gerard only barely aware of the person by his side, feeling his tears fall on his face, thinking of Frank as an angel... My eyes actually watered. Moving.
But now he's angry and I actually think he has a right to be, I mean I would be pissed, too. And still crying and... there's just too much emotion in this story.
Please update as soon as you can, I can't wait for the confrontation. I can already tell I'll most probably cry reading the next chapter.
Author's responseMy cousin threatened to cut my arm off for not letting her play on my laptop. It can't get much worse than that.
Anyway, thank you very much. You have no idea how much I love your reviews. They're freaking amazing.
Next chapter...god, I'm under pressure now. I gotta write something good. If you're disappointed by it, I'm sorry upfront.
(#) LoveAndDeath 2008-03-27 05:26:41 PMWow, I love this story. I just read the whole thing right now and I'm favoriting it!
You're an amazing writer...your writing is so moving.
I adored this chapter.
And I love how you didn't make Bertie the bad guy in your story. That character for him is way too overused.
Author's responseTaaaaank youuuuuuuuu!
And haha, a lotta people said that, the thing about Bert. I totally agree with you, dude.
(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-28 04:53:13 AMAww, the angel is mad. I fucking love Frank, and this story makes me love him more (how is that possible?)
Now... kiss and make-up time? Or how-could-you-do-this-to-me-i-never-want-to-talk-to-you-again?
Hopefully the first one! hahaha
Author's responseAw, really? I think I made him sound like too much of a crybaby...he cries in like every chapter!
But, I really don't think of him like that. He's always seemed a apathetic-but-on-the-inside-i'm-bleeding kind of guy.
Well anyway, thank you for reading. I'll write more soon-ish hopefully...
(#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-03-28 07:43:04 AMWow.
I'm kinda mad at Gee.
Go Frank, he has every right to be mad.
Update Soon Please.
Author's responseYeah, I'd be pretty angry at Gerard too.
He was being a selfish asshole...but I don't wanna say anything more, in case I'd want Frank to say it, so just...THANK YOU!