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A Bard's Tale

A Bard's summary you want to see? Why don't you just read the poetry?

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Humor - Characters:  - Published: 2008/04/02 - Updated: 2008/04/02 - 264 words - Complete

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• A Bard's Tale

  (#) MarkPoa 2008-05-28 10:47:57 PM

  I thought this was free verse, but there was a rhyming scheme. However, it's jarring that there's a rhyme, but no meter. I think if you used a meter, the whole poem would be more effective.
  
  The subject matter is fairly intriguing. I interpreted it as being set in a future ravaged by disease rather than the past. Hope I got that right.

  Author's response

  Thanks for pointing that out. I'm going to try to rewrite it using a meter and see how it goes. You're right, it is set in the future.

• A Bard's Tale

  (#) plainwhitetank 2008-06-28 11:50:52 PM

  i really liked this. i'm not sure what it was about it but it drew me in.
  nice work

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