(#) Wonderbee31 2008-04-06Interesting start, and will be fun to see Neville as the BWL, as well a show Harry will be in this timeline, taking u the spot that canon Nev had, or will he be more like his old self? Can't wait to see what all changes are made with this.
Author's responseActually; Harry is the BWL in this universe; but Neville was the BWL in his home universe. So, basically, Neville has all the memories, but none of the extra abilities, i.e. Parseltounge, connection to snake lips, etc.
Thanks for the feedback
- well, you're off to a rousing start and I love how the temporal transplant did more than just bring Neville back, it altered who was the BWL. With his "memories" of the future, though, Neville should be able to befriend Harry earlier and help him along the way. The two of them should make quite a team, esp. when their ladies join with them. Methinks Ron is not going to enjoy this too much, though, as his jealousy won't allow him to just share Harry's friendship instead of nearly monopolizing it as he does in canon.
Author's responseTrue; Ron just isn't as motivated as Harry and Hermione are; and will be relegated to the sidelines most of the time.
(#) cloneserpents 2008-06-08I know I’m a little late, but I like the twist already. I’ve always liked Neville – perhaps because I can identify with him. It should be nice to see how and where you take this.
Author's responseThanks; I'm glad you are enjoying the story; I'm planning to have a new chapter up by Wednesday
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