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Chapter Two

by red_jacobson 3 Reviews

Neville learns a few things, and meets Harry Potter!

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2008/04/06 - Updated: 2008/04/06 - 1778 words - Complete


  • The Return of the Boy Who Lived

    (#) Wonderbee31 2008-04-06 06:35:33 PM

    Okay, I should have read the first chapter closer. I understand more now, and will still be looking forward to what this version of Neville will do with what looks to be a rekindled friendship with Harry.

    Author's response

    Okay; I'm glad you are up to speed; and; in this verse; the Golden Trio is going to be Harry, Hermione and Neville, with Ron sort of taking canon Neville's place.

    That's not to say that things will go exactly the way they did in canon. GRIN

  • The Return of the Boy Who Lived

    (#) Cateagle 2008-04-07 12:29:35 AM

    I like this Neville. With his foreknowledge, he's able to start tweaking the timeline to improve things. Between an arguement his Gran will accept for getting a proper wand (that's a right proper one, too; I imagine she was impressed at his reasoning, if not his using his own wand) and his efforts to befriend and help both Harry and Hermione, it's going to alter the dynamics for first year considerably. It will be interesting to see how the universe resists his efforts and how strong the reaction will be.

    Author's response

    Thanks; I don't expect too many problems for the first year, because the pieces are already in place, but, going forward, the ripples are going to cause changes to things that Neville remembers, so that his future knowledge won't be as useful.

  • The Return of the Boy Who Lived

    (#) rekrula 2009-01-18 05:46:11 PM

    love the premise of your story! the writing is good, your story telling skills appear to be first-rate, i'm so excited to have found this story, i can't wait to read more. thanks for sharing!

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