Desperate. Desperate thoughts. Desperate hands. Anything to stop the blood, to make the other okay. .Brendon/Ryan. .Rated R for some language.
(#) Luleeluhrahh 2008-04-09 04:27:30 PMWow.
I seriously loved this.
It was so well written and you did a great job!
You gave all the right details, I felt like I was right there in the room with them.
Great, great job.
Oh wow, thanks.
I'm most probably going to continue the story.
Thank you so much!
You have no idea how much I appreciate this.
(#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2008-07-16 03:51:17 PMasdhjdsfdsklg;
I can't believe I hadn't found this until now.
Tears, tears, nothing but tears.
This was too sad. Please, for the love of God, do not think this sucks, because truly, it is one of the most amazing one-shots I have EVER read. No lie.
My breath hitched.
My fingers trembled.
So entirely emotive.
Everytime I read the 'If Brendon were to be okay' I yelled,
"YES, HE'LL BE OKAY, GOD DAMNNIT! HE'LL BE OKAY!" right at my computer. Luckily nobody was around to see me...
I happen to feel the same way as Luleeluhrahh, I pictured myself in the room with them. (Because your talent with words takes my breath away)
But, if I was in the room, I'd be right by Ryan, sobbing too and made sure that Ryan hadn't of taken the gun.
This was so sweet (oddly)
Yet, so terribly sad at the same time. GAH! You have no idea how incredible this is. I should stop ranting.
But I'm jealous of your skillz.
I am unsure of what you should do.
It's already amazing...
Oh, screw it!
If not, it shall forever be in my favorites. Well, I mean, if you do continue, it'll still be in my favorites...
Anyway, I'm rating as well. :]
YOU, my dear, ROCK.