Some real dialogue gets going! If you've stuck through the more dull non-talking parts of the story up until now, God bless you.
- egan's descriptions of everything are so great. this chapter seems to get the drama started. i can't wait for the next chapter. i also know we are going to be best friends forever because you update fast.
Author's responseAh, thank you so much and God bless you as well. I truly, truly, truly am working to update as often as once a day.
(#) uhmhiimemily 2008-04-13 02:10:37 PMI am loving this story. It's so new and unique unlike the other stories where they "instantly" fall in love. =) Keep on writing.
Author's responseThanks so much! I agree, the same "They lock eyes then hips" plot line is really getting old. Glad you like it.