And so it begins.
(#) darkviolet 2008-04-17 03:01:21 AMThat was awesome, that line...How did it go?...aw bless shysmile for reviewing first...'truth to be told, I am too, and I'm narrating'...That made such a difference! People don't do it anymore, they're telling a story and yay if it's a good one but they never interfere and it would be so awesome if you did that again...I mean the dialogue was really great, witty and it felt incredibly real, I could really picture it but man that line was great!
I'm really glad she finally opened up, because before I couldn't really tell who she is and what she's all about but her speech is really witty and clever and full of sarcasm, just how I like it!!!
Author's responseThank you and thank you. I wasn't sure whether that would be taken as interference in a story where you'd rather me keep my distance or not, so I was tentative, but that line wrote itself down, I had nothing to do with it. My fingers just happened to be there.
Yes, character development with Egan...it's been difficult. She's not into talking sometimes, and sometimes she can't shut up. And her mood changes constantly. But she gets her sarcasm from her mama.
That'd be me.
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-03 09:55:24 PM"Stupid, robotic, polite, manipulative, pale freaking half Italian cyborg with sonic bat-hearing." snerk ... you have a real way with words. That seriously made me laugh out loud.
This is a good, original story. Can't wait to see where it goes.