Frank stood a few feet away, yelling in horror, “No! Don’t! You fucking promised!” [[Read my A/N por favor]]
- ODG, I'm glad you didn't make it all cute, I like drama and tension more than anything.
I seriously adore this story. It's one of the best My Chem fan-fictions I've ever read.
I can think of a few ideas to keep the story going but I don't want to tell you how to write it or anything. Idk, maybe you could, like, have a few more chapters of Gee and alcohol against the rest of the guys and then he could start to recover but idk, it's just an idea.
Fucking awesome chapter
I'll be looking forward to the next one(hopefully.)
Author's responseThank you...I think that's all I can say at this point =)
- i don't think you should doubt yourself because i don't know if you've read stories here that just have terrible style of wrtiting and... you know wrote by people who should find another hobby,well you're not one of them you definitely can write and don't worry about the plot repeating itself,people love drama :).
Author's responseOh God...I think I'm blushing.
(#) no_where_tourun 2008-04-15 09:53:45 AMthis story is amazing. i dont find it repetitive.
i like that there is so much drama. and as much as i want them to be together, it build suspense that they dont. and it kept you reading, just you kept thinking ok its going to happen this time. but it doesn't so you want to read the next one...
Author's responseHaha, wow, that's a nice way to look at it.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
(#) asherschick 2008-04-15 10:49:59 AMHell yeah, this story is really amazing! I sometimes think you have this weird grudge against your Frank and Gerard but you write wonderful drama so... You should definitely keep writing it! But, you know, you might like to let us see a flicker of light here and there :P And normal people are like the way you write them usually, at least I know a lot of people that would say "I love you" and then turn it into "I love you as a friend", so... It's in a way realistic, too.
And just wow, I wasn't expecting you'd pull the dream trick on us. I was really shocked to see Frank had been daydreaming, hehe =)
So I say keep up the good work! Cause you are a really good writer and I believe when you finish this story, it's gonna be epic. I,for one, have never seen a story that gets so much reviews and ratings before...
Believe in yourself :)
Author's responseWhoa. I just got home after the crappiest day ever and I read this, and I'm all...smiley all of a sudden. And I swear to you, I love you. Well I love you as much as a person can love another person over the internet. You've been like...awesome, througout. So thank you.
But see, the problem is, I have no idea how to wrap it up. Because, I don't wanna totally bum people out and kill anyone off, but it seems so cheesy to have all the drama and suspense I just built up to END with Gerard and everyone else being perfect and happy, as if this whole thing never happened. So, it'll have to be an epic without an ending, if anything. But I hope I think of some conclusion because initially, I loved this idea.
I don't think people go back to read author's replies a lot, so I probably just rambled to myself...but anyway, thanks.