[[Frerard]] *I found some errors...same random story*
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-04-16 10:31:39 PM
while that may never be my favorite story, i do have to give you a hand for doing something different. i can appreciate that! :)
also, franks last line was priceless and i can, strangely, imagine him saying it. hehe ... and gerard replying that manner as well! how strange! hahaa
anyways, good job! way to be creative! hehe
(#) emovampire 2008-04-16 11:28:44 PM
HAHAHAHAHAHHAAH as soon as i started reading i knew you had to berandom...AWESOM! yoda....heh
(#) Toxoplasma 2008-04-17 11:30:44 AM
that was pretty good. and funny. you should do another one like it . cuz that was real cool.
YODA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah ur cool it's interesting and funny very different :P
This made me laugh, very clever
(#) never0kay 2008-05-15 11:34:23 PM
that was very humorous!!
i loved it
and i loved the randomness of it...
i like random...
This was actually really, really good. It was interesting and a great idea. I wouldn't have been able to do this, I'd get to about the fifth sentence and get too frustrated to carry on :P
But you did a great job.
That was awesome and extremely funny. The ending was the best.
This makes me wanna try it.. and I don't think it's illiterate! Although.. some of my stuff might be..but only from like junior high :)
Thanks again for reading my fic :) I'll most likely have the next chapter up by tonight..if I can manage to get this scene down on paper! AH!