- oh. my. god.
that was seriously intense. the way you built up to it in the entire chapter until the breaking point was really critical to the dramatic finish. personally, i think that whatever happens after that drama will make or break egan and gerards relationship.
two posts in one day too! you are a very busy chick!
it is now past my bedtime... goodnight and good job!
Author's responseI got sudden inspiration. I was so grateful that whoever is up there sent me something that I just went with it. So yes, yesterday was busy. I also went out and bought a candle that smells like icing :] I am indeed busy.
I can't say whether or no this is the pivotal moment or not, even though I made it seem that way in this last chapter. But it's certainly A pivotal moment.
- I can't find a word stronger than 'intense' right now. Just, this whole story, is brilliant and amazing. I love how you develop your characters, and not make them perfect-fan-fic protagonists, y'know? It's real, and that's what I love about a story.
And reading something like this story, something that makes reading emotional and not just an activity to pass time, is really what makes me want more as a reader. I write too and I love how you have written this.
I also love how you update so often! D: =D =D
xoxo | nab
Author's responseI've learnt it's definitely a positive for the readers when you update often.
I am always fighting against my base instincts to give over to the FanFic mainstream stereotype and just let everyone have sex with everyone else--because honestly, who doesn't like a good sexy scene once in a while--and make Gerard snide and Frankie childish to the point of stupidity and Mikey really weak and all this stuff, but they're humans who don't fit any molds (How well we know that) and I want to make these characters as realistic as possible. So I have to make them good and bad in places. I love that you get that it has to be like that.
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