(#) linerlover 2008-04-26awwwwwwwwwww im all sad now. cries
great chapter. i love the way their relationship is progressing, and the whole thing with frank turning her into a five-year-old.
anywhooo... more soon please?
Author's responseThis chapter was kind of a downer at time. Sorry, but it had to be done.
Frank...What can you say about him. I see Egan's relationships with Gerard and Frank as day and night. Her relationship with Frank is fun and light hearted and humorous, sometimes it gets near being almost superficial. But with Gerard, it's darker and more serious and intense. They still have fun together, but they get down to the more nitty gritty when they're together. Like, if you'll notice, Egan doesn't really cry with Frank. But she can show her more depressing emotions to Gerard.
- this chapter was equal parts hilarious and heart-breaking.
egans confession about her wanting a baby was so sad. i was almost in tears.
i want to thank you for expanding my knowledge of useless facts too. i definitely didnt know that babies could distinguish their mothers by their scent. i guess you learn something new everyday huh?
you also used the name marcello again which made my day.
i love this story so much. please keep writing the way you have been.
Author's responseIt was sad, huh? But yeah, it got funny too.
I recently purchased Juno and watched it again for the first time since I saw it in theaters, and the scene where she's had teh baby and she and Bleeker are just laying as she's crying there, that had alot of influence on this chapter. And the book Gingerbread, when Cyd Charisse is explaining to Sugar Pie that if things had been different, she might have been having a baby today, that had alot of influence as well. BTW, if you haven't read Gingerbread, I definitely reccomend it. And like I always say, Egan is me. And I have a strong desire for a baby some day. I'm thinking I'll adopt though.
(#) icyblue858 2008-04-26Oh I hope she and Gerard have a baby and she and Frank just remain friends! Loved the chapter ;)
Author's responseWell, you're very up front.
But it's still up for grabs as to who she's going to be with. I appreciate the input though.
I kinda like keeping it on the edge. I feel something akin to godlike.
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