(#) Wonderbee31 2008-05-04Very interesting part here, and really liking how things are continuing to proceed, and will be looking for whatever hammer drop is coming, as it seems Harry is a diligent student of Murphy. Nice to see more Luna, and maybe Draco's re-Neducation is going to show him that it's not all milk and honey.
- "For Hermione, it was one of the more romantic moments of her life ... She was storing up precious memories, in case she had few chances in the future" - awww, nice. I insist on a happy ending for those two! :-)
Enjoyed reading of Harry's preparations for the second task. Why the hell didn't he - or Hermione - do anything [like that] in canon? He was totally unprepared right up to the final morning, wasn't he? Hmmmph.
- It sounds like they outlawed gillyweed since they specifically name what and only what can be taken by the participants. Personally, I would try to think of anything that the hostage might plant on themselves, but the big problem as the participants see it is getting to the hostages.
Why do so many fanfics mess up Fleur? I would think that the Veela nature would be continuously correcting any imperfections. Also, I have never seen where a scar or two is that bad. You look at the whole person and the scars just blend out to me.
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