- hell ya! woo whoo! this is me dancing around in celebration and giving you a couple of internet hugs.
gerards whole inner-monolouge when he was coming to the conclusion he loved her was so good. i loved the line where he said she took his breath away then you incorporated it back into the story again at the end.
i always thought gerard and egan should have ended up together but im guessing it wont be smooth sailing since ive noticed (who hasnt) the countless arguments they are always having.
cant wait for more!
Author's responseAnd this is me dancing and hugging you back.
Gerard's inner monologue was experimental. I don't usually do things from anyone else's point of view but Egan's. I'm glad you liked it.
Oh, fights? More like lover's quarrel's. Psh. No, actually, they do fight quite alot, you're right, but it's their dynamics. It's kind of how they hang out. But there is no guarantee that everything will be cake for them.
I will update soon.
(#) lalalovexjeje 2008-04-28YAY! WOOHOO! freaking out and dances
I am so happy.
This story just get better and better, and I love it more and more.
I loved how you described his questioning and understanding of his feelings for Egan.
And I am so happy that they are finally together.
I cannot WAIT for the next chapter!
Author's responseWell, I am extremely happy that you're freaking out and happy.
Thank you for saying that.
Thanks, I wasn't sure how letting readers hear what Gerard was thinking would go over. But apparently people liked it.
I am overjoyed I can openly say they're together now too. It's a relief.
(#) icyblue858 2008-04-28Thank God! I mean I love love Mikey and Frank but she and Gerard were just made for each other :)! Great chapter as always, it is my favorite thus far!
Author's responseYeah, Gerard just gets her better. But Frank was a contender for a while. Mikey was never really in the running though, I just think he's sweet so Egan sees him that way too.
Really? Fave? Wow. You really wanted this!
- I'm in the office right now reading this, and I'm trying to think up of a smart, deep comment, complimenting you on how so wonderfully you wrote this chapter.....but I'm blank. Work has turned my brain to mush, but not so bad that I can't fully enjoy this.
Because I fully enjoyed this. I want to scream like a fan girl. GOSH. He loves her. She loves him. I love you. =D
(Here's 1% of that smart comment: I love how you wrote her reaction when he confessed. That was so powerful, I literally held my breath when I read it).
Author's responseReading this has made me all giggly. I feel very bubbly and girly right now. I love compliments.
And I love you too!
You liked that? Good. I was trying to figure out for a very long time how she would react should he come out and say to her "Hey, I love you" or something. So it is fabulous that you liked it.
Gerard held his breath too :]
(#) linerlover 2008-04-29WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMGOMGOMGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
i loved that chapter, especially her reaction to the declaration shit. twas amazing. please write more soon.
Author's responseYeah, I'm getting her reaction was a big crowd pleaser with some people.
I will write more as soon as my Muses get to work.
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