He loved her. He always loved her. She never loved him.
(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-05-01 05:06:23 AMAww, wow........
Jesus I have no clue what to say.
I'll just rate yeah?
But that still wouldn't be enough...........
I shall add to my favourites.
That was so insightful. Girrls are bitches sometimes. Gee's had his fair share of them too.
But like,, Wow!!!!!!
(#) linerlover 2008-05-01 09:26:33 AMkat:
i sat thinking about it for at least half an hour, but i got bored, so i just sat there and wrote randomly. and this is whatcha get.
i was worried that people wouldnt be able to understand all the tense switching, but i guess there was no need.
thanks for reading AND reviewing- means a lot to me.
i have no clue what to say when replying to reviews like your, so yeah. thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou.
and i am really really happy to be added to anyones favourites. i mean dancing happy. and that aint often.
as to the insightful business, i honestly dont know where the insight comes from. i scare myself sometimes.
thank you so much for reviewing. does insanely happy dance
- sarah... sarah sarah sarah...
you killed gerard.
you killed him...
i should stop with the repetition huh?
this is what you do when your bored, kill people off...
steers clear of you
but i loved it.
you know me.
take it from there... not the story, the compliment.
Author's responseawwwwww ty kat.
and yes, repition doesnt suit you.
although... pulls out large knife from drawer
ty veeeeeeery much.
(#) jack-the-ripper 2008-05-26 03:49:26 PMoh gosh, your writing is so realistic. are you consciously trying to make me cry my eyes out?
Author's responsenot consciously... guilty look
okay, well maybe a little.
i was feeling bored and a little depressed when i wrote this, and it was late at night. like now. i always seem to do things best when im tired and bored.
but anyway. thank you so much-- your reviews are really nice to read, and tbh, i need a little cheering up at the moment.
so thank you, again. and again. and again. =]
(#) mcr_rox_42495 2008-08-27 02:40:50 AMI loved this story!
So sad... I really love how you add the flashbacks into the story, along with the lyrics, it creates such a more realistic picture! :D
I'm an angst-addict! I love sad endings...even though this one was kinda tragic...
Author's responseaww thanky.
i thought that all the flashbacks jumping around all over the place would confuse everyone, but apparently not. i aim to make it as realistic as possible-- it gets more of an emotional response from readers.
haha angst-addicts rock. 'cept im a sort of angst/gore/emotional fluffy stuff/supernatural stuff/mind tricks/death scenes/murderer's POV addict. so yeah.
the ending was kinda tragic. wasnt it? XD
anyhow, thanky much for the r&r