The original story, but with a twist...
Its cool coz you've stuck to the story yet added you're own stuff. I'm really interested to know what happens from now on. Post again soon!
It was cool but even though you had an original character it still seemed like you where posting exact dialouge (sp?) from the episodes and every once in a while adding in Kitari. Other than that it was cool! Please Update (if you're going to)
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