Gerard is back in, yay. Frank tries to figure out whats right and wrong. Later he confronts Alyssa... and nearly ruins it all.
(#) ficfriction 2008-05-05 03:34:55 PMI HEART THIS STORY! And deaths in stories make me sad, but hey, if it's for the good of the story, I'll only burn off your eyebrows instead of sending a bomb :D
But yes, the beginning with Gerard is just yay lol
Author's responseYay, thanks ^^
Thanks for answering my question about character deaths. I think i could live without eyebrows... hahaha
(#) aly_ajxxiero 2008-05-05 05:15:45 PMOh My Gaaaaad!!! Pretty storee, Pweetee, Preitee... Whatever the spelling! It's great! Waaaah!! Gerard was finally fucking there for Frankie!! Waaah!!! It's really great!! Update soon!!! Please!! Please! Please!! kneels in front of Sabrina/Crash PLEASE!!!!!!
~aLy ayCee IeRo. =)
Author's responsehaha I'll try and get the next chapter up soon... when i finish writing it.^^
(#) asherschick 2008-05-06 11:49:35 AMI have to review now. Screw the exam tomorrow! I did read this yesterday and rated it but didn't have time to review cause I write huge-ass reviews all the time.
Gaaahhhh! That's all I can say right now. Gerard! Hah, I knew his return was gonna be fantastic but this :O You better not kill him cause he sounded so heroic in those last lines and that is usually never good considering "heroic deaths". Ahhhh, no Gerard killing, no Frank killing pleaseee! I'm partly writing this to manipulate you into letting them survive! But still, if you believe it's necessary... I'll try to keep my eyes from watering :|
And that bitch Alyssa, she better get what she deserves! I can't tell how satisfied I am that Gee finally saw the evil inside her, hah, victory!!
I'm not gonna comment on the first scene. Words won't come to me... But if you'd taken a picture of me reading this yesterday, there probably would have been some drool at the side of my mouth :\ Gee and Frankie together... They're so dreamy xD
Write more soon =)
Author's responseHahaha Hope your exam went well ;)
About the deaths... i probably shouldn't say this but i will def NOT kill Gerard nor Frank. Only I know who will die and how it'll happen... hehehe That is, if i decide to go through with it. We'll see!
Hahaha i loved the first scene too. How Frank puts a stop to it suddenly, and then Gee dares him to say he doesn't love him, and he can't... -sigh- How cute ^^ haha
I wiiiill xD Thanks for reviewing and rating even with exams! You're the best ^^
- OMG I think i know who will die. But im not saying cuz that would be rude. I
Author's responseYou can say it if you want to, i'm not going to tell anyone if they're right or wrong so it really doesn't make a difference. I doubt you'll guess right though hehe
I think your review was cut off... =/
(#) xleftxbehindx 2008-05-08 08:39:50 PMOMG you can't kill Gerard. I will cry forever if you do. But I absoulutely love the story. It is amazing.
Author's responseLol don't worry! Gerard will not die! Frank won't either! I'm not dumb enough to kill off the main characters... just a secondary one... ;)
Thanks! < 333