What happens when the two most weird boys are put together for a project? Gerard Way/wiL Francis pairing.First story so i'm sorry if it's poo.Read and Review so you can tell me if I should continue...
(#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2008-05-04 02:12:35 PMI love it! wiL and Gerard- my two most favourite people ever! also, It's very well written so far: write more! :)
Author's responseHey thank you so much!
I honestly can't believe i got 6 reviews! I didn't even think I was gonna get 1!
But yeah, wiL and Gee are pretty much two of my most favourite people too. I just had this 'urge' to write a story between wiL and Gerard. And from the response, i think i'll guess i'll continue ;)
Thank you again so much!
(#) IeroMyHero 2008-05-04 02:55:57 PMHeyhey
This is sweet. I like your writing. And i loved how you said "perspective" instead of "POV." That is cool stuff, dude.
Just one thing, do double quotes("...") when people are talking instead of ('...') I mean i guess you could stick to those single ones, but in real life books, they do the double quotes.
But honestly, you don't have to change that unless you want to. You're the writer. And a pretty good one too.
Update soon. I like the pairing...
Author's responseMan, you don't know how much it meant to me when I saw that you reviewed. I actually squealed..Pathetic, I know.
I was so nervous when I put it up and automatically regretted it because I've seen all the awesome stories put up and was scared I'd get a load of hatemail..
But gosh, I had to do a double take when I saw people actually reviewed!
And thanks for the little pointer, I will use double quotes in future.
(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-05-04 02:56:11 PMOkay, I have to admit I was pretty shocked by how good your writing style is, most peoples first stories arent written as well as this one is. I'm impressed and I really like it, WiL and Gee... hmm, is it just me who finds that quite yummy? :] Anywho, I definitely think you should continue this - I cant wait to see what happens!
Ray ray xox
Author's responseWow! Thank you!
I'm actually blushing..;)
Yeah wiL+Gee=TOTAL HOTNESS!
They are my two most favourite people, so i thought 'Hey, why not put them together in a story? No one else has..' Hence, me beginning the Odd Pair..
But anyways, from the response i'll be sure to continue :)
Thank you for reviewing!
(#) emovampire 2008-05-04 03:10:16 PMwiL and Gee.......is there going to be GerwiL? or Wirard? hahah that sounds like wizard :)
this story is getting interesting.....
Author's responseHaha! Yeah, I was thinking about that after I wrote it and came up with 'Wilard' xD
Well, you can call it whatever way you think's best.
Thank you so much!
(#) XxCRYSTALLINExX 2008-06-09 04:16:20 AMstill waiting for that update...XD
Author's responseHey, sorry I haven't updated yet but i have three of my friends birthdays this week, all doing something for it. And also I have my science and statistics exam next week so I've been doing a fuck load'a revising for that. So that would explain why I haven't updated. I apologise.
Also, this chapter is the longest one I've done so it's gonna take longer to wrote. At least you're gonna get more than usual ^^
I doubt it'll be too much inconvienience. Loads of other much better stories. Thanks for sticking around anyway! :)