(#) MyFamousLastWords 2008-05-09Ohh Don't Let Bob Die! I Love Bob=)
I Donno,I No This Is Your Story And All But You Kept Typing Alyssa After She Disappeared,Don't You Mean Aileen? It Just Confused Me.
Ohh You Could Like Make Frank Die At the Very End For Good Causes And Thats Another Reason Why Frank Is Down There,Or Something ALong The Lines.
Omg! I'm Telling You How To Write Your Own Story.Sorry Got Carried Away And Now Im Blabbering On.
Ohh War!!!! Next Chapter Please!
Author's responseThanks so much for telling me about that mistake! I've fixed it now ;) I get mixed up with those two names a lot haha
No comment about Bob... and thanks for the idea what the plot of the story is already written ;)
(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-05-09AAAAGH!! THERES GONNA BE A WAAR! Hides I love this story so much, but whos gonna die?? Agh, the tension is killing me! Please update soon!
Author's responsehaha i'll hide with you ;)
Hope it doesn't kill you literally, because you won't find out until almost the very end.
(#) asherschick 2008-05-11I'm back from the dead, yesss!!! Miss me? xP
War is coming, huh? Wow, they're all scattered around the place like ashes and they don't even have any time to get reunited :( And Kat doesn't even have her new power under control! But still it's their own fault they let that bitch run away, they stopped caring abbout her in all that mess but they shouldn't have let that distract them. But turning into a fly, now that's genius, haha, reminds me of Rita Skeeter from HP =)
Oh Mikey, I just realized he's probably one of the most intriguing characters in this story, hell he's the most interesting Mikey character I've ever read, hehe. He's all mystical and seems like he's living in a totally different metaphysical dimension... I wonder if all's gonna be well between him and Gerard...
Now I need the next chapter. All those metaphysical powers will be out in the open, yaaay! My mouth's watering ;)
I'll be waiting for the next update! I think I'll put my powers to good use and get out the next chapter of my story meanwhile xD
Author's responseHaha you know i've been waiting for your review... i was wondering what was taking so long!! xD
Alyssa tricked them well, yesh =/
Although it may not seem like it, Mikey is very important in the story. And very mysterious... for now!
I must admit, this is getting harder and harder to write... so many things are still unknown, so many things are twisted, its hard to write while thinking "i'm going to screw this up, or run into a deadend." Hopefully, i won't!! haha
Yay! Yes, go, run, update your story! I'll be waiting for it! ^^
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