Defeat gives one of the four Fiends a chance to reflect on what she never had.
Very interesting, quite skillfully done, greatly insightful, and highly insightful. You've taken a character practically empty of any personality from the game and crafted her and her relationship with Kain into an excellent tale of emotion. Well done.
I really like this story. I like the history you've made for the fiends and how you gave some insight to their thoughts and motives. I hope you decide to write more about Kain and 'his' fiend. Keep up the good work!
This is very nice. I like the way you've taken the four Fiends and made them more than just enemies. The expansion on their personalities is very nicely done, and I like the relationships between them.
(And yes, the unofficial translation rocks my socks.)
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