- Not bad, some what small in content but it had a few important moments. First off Naruto being confronted by his personalty flaws, and the total worthlessness of Kakashi. It would be one thing for Kakashi to have Naruto share his skills with the others, and recieve some theirs in return but to just out right steal what makes Naruto special and give it away is foolish. Their ninja not the red cross secrets are every thing and Sasuke already has a blood line and the love of a village. Giving out forbiden level techniques like that is harsh. I really hope this makes Naruto totaly distrust Kakashi, and perhaps let the teme die on some later mission. It's amazing in cannon of often Naruto saves Sasuke and Kakashi from death, and any changed Naruto could let him die.
On the other hand I also really hope this wakes Naruto up to the fact he has to be more careful about his abilities not with just his enemies but 'allies' as well, he has not one but two people on his 'team' that have a copy cat eye, any moves he uses around them can and will be stolen. Look what Kakashi does to lee's treasured Taijutsu style in the chunin exam arc. As such I hope Naruto learns to be more secretive.
As for the comment about the page views, I wouldn't let it bother you to much. It does not have to mean people start reading the story and stop, it can also mean that people re-read previous chapters when a new update comes out but don't necessarily read the last chapter as much. Think about it a reader reads the first chapter, then perhaps reads it again when the second or third comes out keep adding to the page count but not the latest chapters.
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