This is chapter 13 of the story, hope you like it :)
(#) LDA 2008-05-17 02:24:33 AM
I like the fic but you gotta slow it down some and explain whats going on in the tornado of ideas and such that is happening, the story is great but it's only bare bones there is no meat to sink our teeth into while reading..
(#) slashslut 2008-05-17 06:42:05 AM
good chapter but it was too short:( no wonder if you were exhausted! btw, fleur seems to have lost her french accent, which is fine with since its easier to read imo but just wanted to point it out:) cheers and read ya later!
(#) Steamdemon 2008-05-17 07:36:44 AM
I am finding this very entertainig
Keep up the good quick work
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-05-17 04:38:44 PM
I like this story.
Them only thing I do not like, the chapters are way to short.
Looking for more, hopefly lomger chapters.
(#) Saldeas 2008-05-17 08:19:46 PM
Wow! 11 out of 13 chapters are in the negatives. That's pretty damned rough............... Apparently other people find the clcihes as tedious as I do. DLP thanks you for the lulz.
(#) SamStone 2008-05-18 06:45:13 AM
Ok I will admit to potential for the story but as LDA said slow it down some. Far too many parts feel summarized and condensed for such notions. As for cliches they can be good jut go in original manners.
(#) r_l_freiman 2008-05-18 08:08:58 AM
Unfortunately, it looks as if you've caught the attention of Dark Lord Potter. Don't let their adolescent behavior get to you.
(#) snowfox 2008-05-18 02:00:05 PM
great story please update soon as all the other storys i am reading have slowed down and thidone has me hooked
(#) justblaise 2008-05-18 06:18:51 PM
This is my favorite story in the whole wide world!!!! OMG no lie, you are the best author on Ficwad, Genocide! I don't think you're cliche at all; I mean you use cliches, but you make them so much better - like a remix to a song! (And don't let those DLP members get you down, they're all immature nerds with aggression issues and no friends anyways!)
Gives DLP evil glare and the shakey finger
Keep up the good work :-D
Story Rating = 6/5