Deals are struck, and friendships die slowly.
(#) clutsy_93 2008-05-22 04:47:28 AM
hot damn, Mikey can change.
:/ scary much?
ahahhahaa, loving it and can't wait for more, how could
Mikey turn on his brother like that.
hahahaha, update soon please/
(#) bess 2008-05-22 10:43:05 AM
i admit this story seems a little sick to me just because i can't imagine someone so nice and sweet being a serial killer but aside from that it's a really catchy story and i'm looking forward to the next chapter:)
(#) -PLWwayy 2008-05-27 02:33:36 AM
Yeah I agree with bess.
Like, Ray ecspecially. He's the sweetest guy ever, and his mannerisms are super cute, I couldn't ever paint him as being cruel.
Gerard being mean is just hot though!
(#) _cranium_ 2008-05-27 03:45:58 AM
i agree with bess, too but for me ti's like when i read this story i gotta forget about the real mcr guys completely before i can actually picture this whole thing happening.
ok so mikey's angry and bitter cause she sorta chose gerard? well that's awful. it's like her fault mikey's turning into a cruel motherfucker. although she didn't have a lot of choices.
(#) IllKillYou 2008-06-07 09:42:41 AM
Aww I liked Mikey better when he was nice.
Is he gonna be nice again?
BUt still, great chapter.