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BertxGerard :One Shot:

by KillCaustic 4 Reviews

Bert's Point Of View. Song-Missing by everything But The Girl. I used this as a contest entryin dA.

Category: The Used - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2008/05/23 - Updated: 2008/05/24 - 490 words - Complete

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  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) IeroMyHero 2008-05-24 11:28:58 AM

    Awwww. I liked this. It was cute. Good job. It was just a little difficult to distinguish song lyrics from the actual lines of the story (wait there were song lyrics, right?) so you might want to italicize or bold the lyrics.

    I love Bert/Gerard stories. I just fucking love them, even if they're sad.

    Author's response

    Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((:

    Sorry I just copy pasted from deviantART, so I forgot to italicize again ((:
  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-06 12:43:33 PM

    that was really sad....
    very beautifully written though!
    nice job!
    how did you do on the contest on dA?

    Author's response

    Suckish :)) I didn't win, there were so much more better than me xD
  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) sleepyfaerie 2008-06-22 07:06:11 AM

    that was so sad, and so sweet

    I think I read this on DA, but hey, I'll comment again!
  • BertxGerard :One Shot:

    (#) candyy17 2008-12-23 06:49:55 AM

    HOW could you write about something like this?!? The concept of "Gerbert" or whatever the fuck you call it is just revolting. FRERARD is one thing, but Gerard and Bert Mc-freaking-CRACKEN??!?! You sicken me. AND you're talentless.

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