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Slayer Story

Hunting down a supermodel with a savage secret.

Category: Horror - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Chapters: 3 - Published: 2008/05/30 - Updated: 2008/06/21 - 2502 words - Complete

Reviews

• Slayer Story

  (#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-03 11:37:31 PM

  Doesn't really give much away, does it? I'm hoping to get readers hooked so that they keep coming back to read the story all the way to the finish.

• Slayer Story

  (#) okokoiz2kool 2009-01-05 02:14:10 AM

  Overall, the story is well written in terms of spelling and grammar, but is too short to draw the reader in. The ending was a bit predictable and the dialogue (towards the end) was a little stiff. Theta's partner didn't seem to serve much of a purpose other than to create a scene for the first chapter. And I think the storyline could have been explored a lot more. I think this story has plenty of potential if worked on and expanded.

  Author's response

  Just wondering: If thisn't a story that a reader would be interested in, then why have you read the last chapter??

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