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When all is lost
(#) ViciousHouse 2008-06-03
I love this.Author's response
Nice to know that somebody does! :)When all is lost
(#) DesdemonaIero 2008-06-03
That's really good. Every time I try to write poems they are really long and aren't that good. I may post some of them, just to prove the suck-ness of them.Author's response
Most of my poems are really long too. This is one of the few shorter ones that I have come up with.When all is lost
(#) Dragon_of_Twilight 2008-06-03
In my opinion, this is a short, yet great poem.
Nice use of language there! The fnial line clears itoff pretty nicely, too, if you nkow what i mean.When all is lost
(#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-03
Yeah...
I was really depressed when I wrote this poem, the words just tumbled out of my imagination all night.When all is lost
(#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-16
nice!
its really descriptive, and i like iiit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yea, its short, but thats ok cause its really good!!
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