A short, depressing poem that I wrote after having a bad day.
I love this.
Nice to know that somebody does! :)
That's really good. Every time I try to write poems they are really long and aren't that good. I may post some of them, just to prove the suck-ness of them.
Most of my poems are really long too. This is one of the few shorter ones that I have come up with.
In my opinion, this is a short, yet great poem.
Nice use of language there! The fnial line clears itoff pretty nicely, too, if you nkow what i mean.
I was really depressed when I wrote this poem, the words just tumbled out of my imagination all night.
its really descriptive, and i like iiit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yea, its short, but thats ok cause its really good!!
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