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When all is lost

A short, depressing poem that I wrote after having a bad day.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2008/05/30 - Updated: 2008/05/31 - 96 words - Complete

Reviews

• When all is lost

  (#) ViciousHouse 2008-06-03 11:37:59 AM

  I love this.

  Author's response

  Nice to know that somebody does! :)

• When all is lost

  (#) DesdemonaIero 2008-06-03 03:13:44 PM

  That's really good. Every time I try to write poems they are really long and aren't that good. I may post some of them, just to prove the suck-ness of them.

  Author's response

  Most of my poems are really long too. This is one of the few shorter ones that I have come up with.

• When all is lost

  (#) Dragon_of_Twilight 2008-06-03 11:28:40 PM

  In my opinion, this is a short, yet great poem.
  
  Nice use of language there! The fnial line clears itoff pretty nicely, too, if you nkow what i mean.

• When all is lost

  (#) BlackAngelChick 2008-06-03 11:35:38 PM

  Yeah...
  I was really depressed when I wrote this poem, the words just tumbled out of my imagination all night.

• When all is lost

  (#) Strawberrykitsune 2008-06-16 04:43:58 PM

  nice!
  its really descriptive, and i like iiit!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  yea, its short, but thats ok cause its really good!!

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